Feedback from Ivor

Ivor who is a professional and has written script for a variety of shows came into give us tips to improve our game show as well as to help us develop it by making it even better. When Ivor came in we presented our group presentation to him and Me , Ryan and Yasin represented our group to explain what it was about as well as to go through the presentation. He was impressed with our idea but he did have some improvements that he suggested to us.

He was also a bit confused about the name of the game show we chose which was 'In it to win it' he told us that there is already another show on BBC which is called the exact same thing so he suggested it to us that we should always check if the name we choose isn't already used anywhere else as that is something that is not really allowed to do in the real world.

He also told us that we need to try and build up each round of the game show so that there van be some tension and suspense between the teams which will make the audience feel more intrested and attracted to the show.

When he saw the presentation he said we need to think about the audience more as they need to try and understand the aim of the game show a lot more as he felt as if the information we used did get confusing. We were also told to think about the time the game show will be airing on TV  as that will have a impact on the game show as if you air it on a time where everyone is at work or busy then there won't be many people to watch the show which won't help the game show from going on.

Ivor also suggested to us that we should try and make the game show more entertaining for example the host should be really funny by adding some jokes there and here during the show so that the audience will have something to laugh about instead of it being just tensed all the time as that is not the best way to keep a game show going. We also had to think more about the script as he didn't think it was long enough to be an appropriate amount to be used in the game show.

All these ideas were taken into consideration in our next group meeting and we all tried to make as much improvements as we could so that the game show turned out to be decent.